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My Wunder Pet

1/25/2014

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My daughter and I like to write and we occasionally sit in bed together with our laptops and work on creative projects. Tonight we're playing with a plot generator from the Scholastic site.

Write a newspaper ad to sell a young iguana who only talks in rhyme.
Amaze your friends with the all-purpose talking iguana from Wunder Pets! Only $14.99 plus S&H!

Jimmy read and re-read the back of the current issues of Laugh magazine. In the three years of his addiction to this publication, never before had he seen such an alluring and offbeat advertisement. But now, among the magic tricks and greeting card opportunities, he was staring at the best offer any 13-year-old could ever imagine.

Who wouldn't want a talking pet? Think of the cool factor with the kids at school. Everybody would want to visit with him and have a chance to hear the animal speak. His popularity would skyrocket.

"Mom," he called downstairs, "can I go on the computer?"

"For what purpose?" came the reply from the kitchen. Jimmy's mom was a cautious arbiter of screen time.

"I want to work on my banking spreadsheet."

"Go ahead." She likely thought Jimmy was taking the initiative to balance his savings and college accounts. He'd received multiple lectures about the importance of managing one's finances, and how he would need to demonstrate simple, common sense money management before he would see a marked increase in his allowance.

But Jimmy just wanted to check and make sure he had the requisite funds to purchase his iguana and resulting ticket to fame. He pulled the laptop from its charging station and carried it to the desk, opening and powering it up en route.

By the time he set it down and arranged the mouse cord, his desktop was ready and the system had connected to "FBI Surveillance Van," the home wireless. Jimmy's dad considered himself a jokester and was immensely pleased with this network name.

Jimmy launched his browser and opened his spreadsheet. As of the end of the previous month, he had $347.09 in his "fun" account, separate from the $866.10 held safely away in his college account. His parents had made a point of setting up the two accounts so that he could watch his financial future grow. They'd also set up automatic monthly allowance payments, with equal amounts going to each. College was essentially untouchable, and "fun" was spending money. He was of course encouraged to move portions of "fun" to "college" to increase the investment in his future. He was of course a 13 year old and had no intention of locking those precious "fun" dollars away.

He logged off, powered down his computer, and re-docked it for charging. He went downstairs and found his mom cleaning the stovetop, a weekly occurrence due to the family's addiction to bacon.

"Mom, can you help me mail away for a talking iguana?"

Silence. Scrubbing.

"Mom?"

"Seriously, Jimmy?" she responded with a humorless sigh.

"I saw it on the back of Laugh and I thought it'd be cool. I have the money. Can you write a check for me and I'll pay you back?"

"Jimmy, seriously?" she repeated. Jimmy was tempted to make a sarcastic comment about her hearing, but thought better of it.

"Yeah, Mom - I've never tried any of the stuff they sell, but this sounds really neat. Can you? Will you?"

"Jimmy, they can't possibly have talking iguanas. They just want your money and they're tricking kids like you into sending it to them. You know that, right?"

"But Mom, it's Laugh. It's a real magazine. They wouldn't try take money from kids for nothing, would they?"

"No," his mom sighed loudly for about the fourth time. "They wouldn't outright bilk you out of your money, but it won't be what you think. When I was a kid, my Richie Rich magazines advertised Sea Monkees - tiny, humanoid sea creatures that would colonize your fish tank and smile endearingly at you. They turned out to be ordinary shrimp brine with none of the cartoony characteristics that were illustrated on the advertisement. They were a big disappointment and money-waster."

"But Mom," Jimmy tried again, "they say it's a talking iguana! Even if it's a baby iguana, it's guaranteed to talk, right?"

"Jimmy, I won't argue with you anymore. I'm just saying that it's an unlikely promise and that they're likely to have thought of an angle that you haven't considered. But if it's what you want to spend your money on, you can do as you like. Fill out your order slip and leave it on the table. I'll write a check for you and you can mail it in the morning."

The next morning Jimmy took his completed order, stamped and addressed, and dropped it in the wall of the post office on his way to school.

...

That Friday, just three days later, Jimmy arrived home from school to find a package waiting for him on the mail table. The words "LIVE ANIMAL" were stickered on all 6 sides and there were a series of screen holes at both ends.

"It's here!" he yelled delightedly. He heard a clatter from the kitchen as he rummaged in a basket in search of a pair of scissors.

"It came this morning," his mom said as she appeared in the doorway. "The postman rang the doorbell and left it on the step, so I brought it in as soon as it arrived. I'm a little concerned that it hasn't made a sound, though..." she trailed off, demonstrating the concern she had either for the life of the creature contained within or for Jimmy's feelings that she feared would be crushed shortly by the ruse of exotic purchases from a boy's magazine.

Jimmy found the scissors and carefully sliced the creases of the packing tape the held each edge. He was careful to keep the box flat on the table while he did so, slowly rotating it as he proceeded. He did not acknowledge his mother's concern. He lifted off the top and...

An iguana blinked at him from the confines of a shoebox-sized mesh cage.

Jimmy blinked back, mouth open, surprised to find that he was indeed the new owner of an iguana. Jimmy's mother mirrored the look, as well.

"Well, hello," said Jimmy to his new friend. "What shall we call you?"

The iguana blinked again.

"I wonder how it's supposed to talk," he said. "How do I have a conversation with my talking iguana?"

"Jimmy," his mom responded, "I'm just glad for you that the company sent you a live iguana. I really didn't think it would come as we expected. As for the talking, though, the plain truth is that iguanas simply don't talk."

"Well, most of us don't," said the iguana.

Jimmy and his mom blinked at the iguana.
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Contests for young writers

1/17/2014

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My daughter mentioned that she was helping a friend with edits on a manuscript that the friend was submitting to a writing contest. We talked a bit about the process and then I asked her if she, herself, had thought about entering any contests.

She shrugged.

It occurs to me that some of these contests (the legitimate ones, anyway) offer not only honor and glory (and occasional cash prizes), but also experience in patience, acceptance, and rejection. They also offer young people the opportunity to begin building a portfolio of work and a resume to match.

When we began to search out some contests that might be appropriate to enter, we found a great number of hits for our search terms. Unfortunately, many of the hits were for sites with suspicious names and lacked any sort of accreditation with which we could be comfortable. We discovered some long-expired contests, but we otherwise only found submission guidelines for Cricket magazine and a local library contest.

This led me to consider online library resources. I didn't necessarily find anything in the databases, but we took the adventure to contact the 24/7 librarian through the dialogue portal on the site. My daughter was soon connected to "Gillian," who offered the sites we had originally found and then dug a little deeper, particularly in terms of helping us narrow down the search to "reputable" sites.

It was a fruitful set of results and Gillian was responsive and helpful. He/she also reminded us to use .edu or .gov to help narrow our sources. [Aside: these are also the appropriate web extensions to locate art and text in the public domain.]

To save you a little trouble, and to offer up a little bit of competition for my daughter, here are some of the sites we are considering:

  • Cricket (compensated)
  • Highlights (contributors age 16 and older may be compensated)
  • Scholastic (individual and collaborative competitions)
  • Imagine contests (run by the Johns Hopkins Center for Talented Youth)
  • River of Words at St. Mary's College of California (environmental writing)
  • Our Own Words (Pierce County Library in Washington)
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Where are those elves?

12/4/2013

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All writers have this vague hope that the elves will come in the night and finish any stories.
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Day 15 - dropping off the horse

11/23/2013

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Honestly, I'm a little tired of horses right now. This is what you get when you don't plan what you're going to write.
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Day 14 - black horse

11/20/2013

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...and another horse arrives...
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Day 13 - new horsey arriving

11/19/2013

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My work today includes the arrival of a new horse!
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